2nd Draft: Decisions and Revisions

For this blog I will be showing you the progress I made from my first attempt in making my magazine and how I will keep improving with things I should fix or change.

For my second draft I fixed many things based on my classmate critiques.

COVER: I kept the one that most of my classmates loved. I only added the date "May 2025"

TABLE OF CONTENTS: I lowered the opacity of the background photo that way you can see clearly the articles and page numbers.

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD: I created another page including family tradition and another way to eat the food. I also added page numbers at the bottom. On page 8 I fixed the pictures of the cooking process and made it more smaller and separated it adding the steps with the pictures so everyone knows what the photos are for.